Peer Evaluation

1.       What do you think is the strongest part of the blog? This could be a certain post, the writing style, the graphic design, the use of alternative media, the images, etc. What makes this element so strong?

I think that a good part of the blog overall was the diary entry that was put in on Chistmas day, I think there was one small paragraph in it that was very clever in a very simple way:

I should be greatful, I got so many presents under the tree waiting to be opened. I just cant face the thought of going downstairs. I'm a mess.

 

2.       Is there a part of the blog you find confusing? A part that doesn’t seem to quite match the rest or the character for which it was designed? A link for which you don’t understand the connection? Can you give some suggestions for how to improve that part?

I was a little confused about the links to different research themes, it might have just been because I haven’t done that yet….But I just wasn’t sure what the link to a song by Jack Johnson was. I was probably just being blind though.

3.       After reading the blog, what would you like to know more about? Is there a post that leaves you with questions? Write down at least two questions to help your partner further develop this blog.

I think if it isn’t to much work that it would be really good to do like a diary entry a few months after Christmas about how lily is doing, her parents etc… her new school, new house and so on.

4.       Did you notice any major misspellings or grammatical issues? Please note down anything.

There were a few spelling mistakes but otherwise it was all good.

 

 

 

 

5.  Did your partner fulfil all the requirements on the Character Blog Requirements handout?